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minus-squaretisktisk@piefed.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·2 days agobed THAT IS about TO wake up* Ow, it hurts, had to band-aid quick
minus-squareJayDee@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·edit-21 day ago“The wild boar I drugged with fentanyl is under the bed , about to wake up.” It just needed a comma, not more words. An ‘and’ would have also sufficed. Edit: also your correction communicates that the bed is about to wake up instead of the boar.
minus-squaretisktisk@piefed.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·1 day agohuh, you’re right. It is the boar waking up not the bed. …not sure how I got this one wrong /s
bed THAT IS about TO wake up*
Ow, it hurts, had to band-aid quick
“The wild boar I drugged with fentanyl is under the bed , about to wake up.”
It just needed a comma, not more words. An ‘and’ would have also sufficed.
Edit: also your correction communicates that the bed is about to wake up instead of the boar.
huh, you’re right. It is the boar waking up not the bed.
…not sure how I got this one wrong /s
It works as-is though.